Content and information: So I think the idea very creative. The plot is also well described by using sound effects, but the voice is not very clear. It was hard for me understand what was going on - all I knew was some monsters in a jungle - from the sound effects, of course. There was also a conclusion, which sums up everything and provide basic info. Nice.
Technical Effects: Transitions are good. All sounds connect to each other. I can hear that you use skills such as fade in, fade out and other techniques to make transitions smoother. Very nice.
Sound effects: You have very high quality sounds. The sounds really describe the plot. It gives people a kind of mood when listening and the music does not distract people from listening.
Improvements: The pronunciation can be better. It would have been much better if I can understand words that were spoken. But over all, sound effects were high quality, there were a lot of skills and techniques used, so generally it's excellent. The only question I have is if its a comic book, is using many sound effects disappoint people when reading the book, because you know, its a book, it will not have as many sounds and moods as real sound record. :D
Content : Your ideas are creative, but the voice, I can't hear it well, It hard for me to understand your commercial. But at least I can know the ideas of the commercial. Well done
Transitions : Your transitions are messy, I don't know what are you talking and who are talking. Like, it really hard to hear, but you doing a good jobs.
Sound Effects : You using the sound effects really well, I can understand some parts by listen to the sound effects.
Improvements : You need to do the transitions more clearly, so the audiences know that you are changing the people talking and what is going on.
Content: I love the idea of advertising a comic book for children (?) and teenagers! I also love the sound effects that you put in the advertisement, it does not affect much to the voices that overlap with the sounds, but the voices are not exactly audible. I got the part where the people was trying to contact each other because there were monsters or something, but the rest, I gave up. All in all, I love this idea, I also love the fact that it shows the violent side of the comic, to attract the teenagers, very effective! I love the conclusion, sums up the idea very clearly! Great job!
Technical effects: Overlapping music and sound effects did not interrupt with the voices, smooth transition and very good music selection to fit with the theme!
Sound effects: The sounds are awesome, most of them are epic and loud, creating good mood for the audience! Though some of the gun sounds are a little loud and I can't really hear the voice behind them, just a little bit, it's still good though.
Improvements: Your voicing can be a bit clearly, it's good in general, but some of the voices are very low or don't go well with the sound effects and background music. I think making sound effects for a comic book like this will cause the teenagers to overwhelm with the plot of the comic, which is another great factor you guys make! I love this!
I think your is very good and you have a very good sound efffect, and very good talking, but i think at the introduction you can make it better, you can cancel some of the sound effect, and the sound is low quality.
Content: Ideas are creative and good effects but the voices aren't good. I hardly hear what you say. Transitions: Everything messed up and left a mess. Sound effects make your transitions tough and hard to understand. Sound effects: Good choices for sound effects but you couldn't use it probably. Music should be smaller so that your record could be clearer. I loved that your work had a lot of great sounds. Improvements: Be careful with audio layers. Music is good but it lowered your voices and if it's a book for children, you should talk something about it. That's all.
Content and information: So I think the idea very creative. The plot is also well described by using sound effects, but the voice is not very clear. It was hard for me understand what was going on - all I knew was some monsters in a jungle - from the sound effects, of course. There was also a conclusion, which sums up everything and provide basic info. Nice.
ReplyDeleteTechnical Effects: Transitions are good. All sounds connect to each other. I can hear that you use skills such as fade in, fade out and other techniques to make transitions smoother. Very nice.
Sound effects: You have very high quality sounds. The sounds really describe the plot. It gives people a kind of mood when listening and the music does not distract people from listening.
Improvements: The pronunciation can be better. It would have been much better if I can understand words that were spoken. But over all, sound effects were high quality, there were a lot of skills and techniques used, so generally it's excellent. The only question I have is if its a comic book, is using many sound effects disappoint people when reading the book, because you know, its a book, it will not have as many sounds and moods as real sound record. :D
Content : Your ideas are creative, but the voice, I can't hear it well, It hard for me to understand your commercial. But at least I can know the ideas of the commercial. Well done
ReplyDeleteTransitions : Your transitions are messy, I don't know what are you talking and who are talking. Like, it really hard to hear, but you doing a good jobs.
Sound Effects : You using the sound effects really well, I can understand some parts by listen to the sound effects.
Improvements : You need to do the transitions more clearly, so the audiences know that you are changing the people talking and what is going on.
Content: I love the idea of advertising a comic book for children (?) and teenagers! I also love the sound effects that you put in the advertisement, it does not affect much to the voices that overlap with the sounds, but the voices are not exactly audible. I got the part where the people was trying to contact each other because there were monsters or something, but the rest, I gave up. All in all, I love this idea, I also love the fact that it shows the violent side of the comic, to attract the teenagers, very effective! I love the conclusion, sums up the idea very clearly! Great job!
ReplyDeleteTechnical effects: Overlapping music and sound effects did not interrupt with the voices, smooth transition and very good music selection to fit with the theme!
Sound effects: The sounds are awesome, most of them are epic and loud, creating good mood for the audience! Though some of the gun sounds are a little loud and I can't really hear the voice behind them, just a little bit, it's still good though.
Improvements: Your voicing can be a bit clearly, it's good in general, but some of the voices are very low or don't go well with the sound effects and background music. I think making sound effects for a comic book like this will cause the teenagers to overwhelm with the plot of the comic, which is another great factor you guys make! I love this!
I think your is very good and you have a very good sound efffect, and very good talking, but i think at the introduction you can make it better, you can cancel some of the sound effect, and the sound is low quality.
ReplyDeleteContent: Ideas are creative and good effects but the voices aren't good. I hardly hear what you say.
ReplyDeleteTransitions: Everything messed up and left a mess. Sound effects make your transitions tough and hard to understand.
Sound effects: Good choices for sound effects but you couldn't use it probably. Music should be smaller so that your record could be clearer. I loved that your work had a lot of great sounds.
Improvements: Be careful with audio layers. Music is good but it lowered your voices and if it's a book for children, you should talk something about it. That's all.
But really, I like it a lot