I can't not see which is your focus point You have a very good creative idea like you use other movie picture.
I love the art word and the picture ! It is very good, but I think making the title "focus point" will be better.
Good background , fantastic font. Discount you need to show bigger to get more attention.
I can't see your words it so complicated.You are creative, you use a picture from another media as your poster.
Use more descriptive words, what is the price of rides (Mr.Michale will ask you about this)?. Where is your focal point?
I can't not see which is your focus point
ReplyDeleteYou have a very good creative idea like you use other movie picture.
I love the art word and the picture ! It is very good, but I think making the title "focus point" will be better.
ReplyDeleteGood background , fantastic font. Discount you need to show bigger to get more attention.
ReplyDeleteI can't see your words it so complicated.
ReplyDeleteYou are creative, you use a picture from another media as your poster.
Use more descriptive words, what is the price of rides (Mr.Michale will ask you about this)?. Where is your focal point?
ReplyDelete